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文中词汇使用灵活，高级词汇使用较丰富；作者英语功底扎实，可适当调整文中从句数量；恰当的使用了过渡词和衔接词，衔接手法做的很棒。
It's true that recent years, serious climate changes are becoming common, tsunamis typhoon air pollutions which disturb human so much. These phenomenon are all relative to the human activates. So what should we do ? some people say it's too late to do anything to problem, other people believe that effective measure could be taken to stuck things getting serious. It's tipping point for humans, however it's not too late to take another practice. back to decades ago , people didn't aware of the importance of Environmental System, bunch of businesses were built at the coast of environment, hundreds of thousands of tress was cutting down, factories discharged polluted water into the river, all these actives made our home land condition worse. But now things changed ,more and more people noticed the importance of protecting our home land. Take our country for instance, Governments authorities make no effort ot publish the masses how and why we should protect environment, people know to establish this faith need not only one generation, so you can catch the ideas of it which was written to the textbook for educating. and lots of environmental protecting law were enforced. Our government also fund a huge capital to protect environment ,like tree planting plan, ground water purifying etc. with the effort of everyone, we can see a huge improvement in environmental protecting. Over all, I believe as long as we make efforts , our mother land will be getting better in the near future.
