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高一英语作文模拟题:关于汽车

发布时间:2013-05-16 15:20浏览次数:2082
要求:
随着人们生活水平的提高,越来越多的人拥有了自己的汽车,你班同学就此展开了一次讨论,提出两种不同的观点和看法。请你根据所提供的信息给报社写一封信,
客观介绍这两种看法。 
赞同者认为:
1.方便、快捷、舒适的交通工具;
2.反映出国民生活条件提高,国家富强;
3.带动其他行业发展。
反对者认为:
1.废气污染严重;
2.过多则影响交通,导
致更多事故;
3.停车问题日益突出。
注意
1.信的开头已为你写好;
2.词数:100左右;
3.参考词汇:方便的 convenient;交通 transportation
用户的作文(系统评分70.0分
评语:

采用了简单的衔接手法,行文流畅;文中从句的使用的有点少了;词汇表达灵活丰富请继续保持,也能较好的使用一定的高级词汇。

用户练习作文:

With the development of people living condition, More and more people are buying a car as their daily transportation. honestly speaking, Automobile industry takes a lot of conveniences for people,and the same time, there are plent of disadvantages which peole can not predict. because of the cars, our traval becomes convenient,fast and comfortable.Automobile industry upgrade our industry style.it improves people living condition and economy development.It realizes the dream that people want to dream. But we also have to face all kinds of problems that automobile lead to.at first, the air pollution is the most important problem.secoundly,many people lost their lives or hurt themselves in the traffic accident.Thirdly, people are anxious for the traffic, at last, there are not enough place to park the cars.Fortunately people pay more attention for these problems to look for the measures to solve them.

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