小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

单词拼写很棒，可考虑增加高级词汇的使用量；从句使用量不足；行文稍欠流畅，应适当增加连接词的使用。

My best friend is nice guy! He's tall and fat, although he is still young and handsome，but he has started to lose his hair. He always help me and don't want any return, but I can't help him so much. We don't live a same city, it takes six hours by train from my home to his home. We only meet several times a year, usually we contact use the cell-phone.