小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

文中词汇表达较丰富恰当，但高级词汇稍显不足；句式变化多样，句法方面做的很棒；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用。

My best friend is a nice guy! He's tall and fat, he is still young and handsome，but he has started to lose his hair. He always help me and don't want any return, but I can't help him so much. We don't live the same city, it takes six hours by train from my home to his home. We only meet several times a year, usually we contact by the cell-phone.