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2002年专八英语作文真题:Personal quality

发布时间:2013-05-18 16:10浏览次数:3066
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题目 SOCIABILITY: THE MOST IMPORTANT PERSONAL QUALITY OF A UNIVERSITY SUTDENT
说明 All of us would agree that in order to be successful in the present-day society, we university graduates have to possess certain personal qualities that can enable us to realize our aim. What do you think is the most important personal quality of a university graduate? Write a composition of about 300 words on the following topic: THE MOST IMPORTANT PERSONAL QUALITY OF A UNIVERSITY STUDENT
要求
1.in the first part of your writing you should present your thesis statement
2.in the second part you should support the thesis statement with appropriate details
3.in the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.
字数:300满分:100分
用户的作文(系统评分83.5分
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拼写方面做得很棒,平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;文中衔接词和过渡词使用的很棒;可适当增加从句的使用;请注意分段。

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How your personal quality is most important in society to look forward to being successful. As far as I know, the university is like a little size of the society and this place will train yourself to improve to get along with anyone which maybe is a student or friend. All we have to do is how long it take to enhance your personal quality. So why would I emphasize that your personal quality is more important than studying? At first, there is no denying that when you graduate from school, most people particularly pay attention on your performance of the school including studying grade and human relationship. Second, you enter new company after several days, your boss will focus on your behavior that is interactive with your colleague and effective working. Finally, both skill of them you have would have opportunities to move up the level of your job.

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