小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

句式变化多样，句法方面做的很棒；文中词汇表达较丰富恰当，但高级词汇稍显不足；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用。

My best friend is a nice guy! He's tall and fat, although he is still young and handsome that he has started to lose his hair. He always help me and don't want any return but I can't help him so much. We don't live the same city that it takes six hours by train from my home to his home. We only meet several times a year and usually we contact by the cell-phone.