希望作者可以加强词汇表达多样性,尤其是高级词汇的积累;增加一些从句的使用,文章会更不错;文中基本没有过渡词和衔接词,建议增加衔接词汇的积累。
Dear Mr. Johnson We have received 3,000 products from your company, but according to our signing of the No. 35 order, the number of products should be 3,500. The other 500 piece We have not received so far. Please check your product list. We are looking forward to your early reply! Yours sincerely,