一些高级词汇的使用也比较灵活,但文中词汇表达丰富度不足;增加一些从句的使用,文章会更棒;文章结构欠严谨,基本没有衔接成分。
Hello Mary, I'll have one week business trip on tomorrow, so I can't discuss with your about hold a party in New year. It's the time for you to do discuss the thing and it is up to you to do make a decision. afterthat inform me about finally decision.