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2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第3套):网络沟通

发布时间:2014-06-09 15:41浏览次数:12896
要求:

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.


用户的作文(系统评分79.5分
评语:

采用了适当的衔接手法,层次清晰;作者词汇表达比较灵活多变,尤其是高级词汇使用较恰当;从句使用量不足。

用户练习作文:

As is shown in the picture ,a man is communicating with his child on the internet due to his child isn't his side. Nowadays,as our technology boosts,we can communicate with the one we miss or we love on the internet when she or he from distance.Therefore ,internet extends a helpful hand when we are in need.However ,from my perspective ,electronic communication can never replace the face- to- face communication.Somehow,not only can face to face communication express more real but also express more clear.And we can eyed the facial expression of speakers by chatting face to face.Then we will feel more genuine and real. Consequently,I love the face to face communication.

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