复杂句使用不错,句法规范;采用了简单的衔接手法,行文流畅;作者词汇量有些小,要注意检查拼写错误。
It is pleasure for me to intorduce my hometown to my dear friend Jack.My hometown is small ,but it is also a very beautiful and quiet place.The river flowing through the village is most interesting place.Beacuse there are so many fish in the river,we can fish on the side,and we can sit on the stone to watch the birds flying up our heads and enjoy the sunshine.The river is so quiet,we can have a sleep when listening the water flowing.