可适当增加几条从句;可适当增加连接词和衔接词的使用;作者能较恰当使用丰富词汇,在高级词汇方面希望能更熟练一些
when I was in junior high school, I like my new English teach. she is very excellent and knowlegeable. Becuse she is good at English,so she has taken part in English speech competition when she was during university,and achieved good result.I decided to learn from her how to improve learning method. My teacher likes speaking English with us in the class and she said that she hoped students speak and practice more.