文中词汇使用较丰富恰当,但高级词汇表达还需要很大提升;作者在句法层面做的很棒;全文结构较为严谨。
When I was in junior high school, I like my new English teacher. She is very excellent and knowledgeable. Because she is good at English,so she has taken part in English speech competition when she was during university,and achieved good the result. I decided to learn from her how to improve learning method. My teacher likes speaking English with us in the class and she said that she hoped students speak and practice more.