高一英语作文模拟题:写信介绍中秋节

应增加文中从句的使用；采用了简单的衔接手法，行文流畅；作者词汇表达较丰富，高级词汇需继续加强，拼写检查要重视。

China is one of the long history countries in the world, there are many special festivals which kept from ancient time.today I introduces the middle autoum festival as the traditional festival in China. The middle autoum festival represatives the family united,all family members have dinner together at night.they share mooncake which is only eaten at the festival night ,at this moment they look up the bright moon which is the brightest all a year.though people spend a short time with their family,It is the happy day when they can't forget for ever.