托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第52篇:草率的判断是否可信

文中衔接词和过渡词使用的很棒；作者句法基本功不错，可适当增加从句的使用；作者词汇基础不错，在高级词汇的积累上还要再接再厉。

I don't like snap judgements, so I definitely agree with this. Let me tell you why. First, snap judgements is mostly based on little information, that means you don't understand the whole system, the whole events behind, so this may generate wrong conclusions when you trust it and make some decisions according to it. Secondly, sometimes it is not right at all. Even though people may say "Seeing is believing", however, what you seeing just deceive you sometimes. The last thing, it is bad for you. Especially you did lots of these kind of things, people will consider that you are not trustable. So, I would advice that when we analyze things, we'd better know about it completely, and then we can make some thoroughly judgement.