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【题目要求】
A person you know is planning to move to your town or city. What do you think this person would like and dislike about living in your town or city? Why? Use specific reasons and details to develop your essay.
【题目分析】
这是一个讨论假设问题的题目。尽量展开想象。注意：不要只说my city，要指出你所在城市的名字， 比如：Beijing, Shanghai等等。人们会喜欢的有：女人喜欢商场;男人可能喜欢书店;大的公园、动物园;名胜古迹;文化氛围；人们会讨厌的有：交通堵塞;空气不新鲜;大城市的排外主义(exclusivism)、不友善(unfriendly);语句间的衔接成分用得不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；词汇表达灵活多样请继续保持，不过高级词汇的积累还有很大的空间；作者英语功底扎实，可适当调整文中从句数量。
I'm living in New York city now, things here are like the two sides of coin. you may like the convenience here, if you're an eater, you can find kinds of cuisine along the worldwide here , if you a night person, you can find 24 hours restaurant, pharmacy or clubs here, if you are a sporting addict, you may find so many spots to take exercises, either indoors like gym or outdoors like safe parks. If you don't like driving, are afraid of poor transportation , you can definitely evade this problem here, you are having 24 hours subway here, and lots of lines you can go kind of like anywhere. and also If you like traveling, you can spend a long time to visit place in New york city. If you like meet all kinds of people, and don't like racism, you will find here is the right place. but , you may not like the other side of this new york. the life pace is so quick, if you don't keep you step with others, you'll feel like you are alone. And what's more, people are not hospitality, everyone walks fast through the skyscrapers in Manhattan , they're like hurry to do things, they don't have time to say Hi to other guys. There are traffic jam here, and sometimes subway got problem to pause the working, you need to adjust yourself to that. I've been here for 3 years, I like here. Hope you can come here one day.
