2012年6月英语四级作文真题:过度包装的现象

文中词汇使用较丰富恰当，但高级词汇表达还需要很大提升；从句数量不足，可适当增加从句和复杂句的使用；可适当增加连接词和衔接词的使用。

Nowadays a increasing number of goods on excessive packaging.A cup of ordinary water packaging by the clothing and placed in the supermarket,we call it from nature.fruits put in beautiful box,clothes packaging by well-designed plastic bags,and so on,to name but a few. There are several causes of excessive packaging.For one,the company believe that they can attract customer's attention by the well-design.