2012年6月英语四级作文真题:过度包装的现象

文中词汇表达较丰富恰当，但高级词汇稍显不足；错误句子很少，但从句使用不熟练；可适当增加连接词和衔接词的使用。

Nowadays a increasing number of goods on excessive packaging.A cup of ordinary water packaging by the clothing and placed in the supermarket,we call it from nature.fruits put in beautiful box,clothes packaging by well-designed plastic bags,and so on,to name but a few. There are several causes of excessive packaging.For one,the company believe that they can attract customer's attention.