从句使用量不足,应增加从句和复合句的使用;文中词汇表达较丰富恰当,但高级词汇稍显不足;采用了简单的衔接手法,行文流畅。
Nowadays a increasing number of goods on excessive packaging.A cup of ordinary water packaging by the clothing and placed in the supermarket,we call it from nature.fruits put in beautiful box,clothes packaging by well-designed plastic bags,and so on,to name but a few. There are several causes of excessive packaging.For one,a large number of company believe that they can attract customer's attention by the well-designed.On the other hand, customers believe the more beautiful designed, the best quality the goods are