2012年6月英语四级作文真题:过度包装的现象

文中词汇表达较丰富恰当，但高级词汇稍显不足；从句数量不足，可适当增加从句和复杂句的使用；文中衔接词丰富。

Nowadays a increasing number of goods on excessive packaging.A cup of ordinary water packaging by the clothing and placed in the supermarket,we call it from nature.fruits put in beautiful box,clothes packaging by well-designed plastic bags,and so on,to name but a few. There are several causes of excessive packaging.For one,a large number of company believe that they can attract customer's attention by the well-designed.On the other hand, customers hold the view that the more beautiful designed, the best quality the goods are.