托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第52篇:草率的判断是否可信

句式变化多样，句法方面做的很棒；文中词汇表达灵活多样请继续保持，高级词汇积累也做的很棒；不能熟练使用过渡词，文章结构欠佳。

As a former procurator worked in People's Procuratorate of Zhoushan city, my main job was fighting against corruption which is still the focus of concern of Chinese. I obtained much experience through my work. I am skillful in collecting evidence, interrogation, and legal analysis. Sometimes, I had to sit up all night to interrogate a suspect. So far, I have investigated more than 20 corruption cases and punished corruptionists in accordance with the law. Now, I am working at the Supervisory Committee of Zhoushan city/ Discipline Inspection Committee of Zhoushan city. I have responsibility to write articles, report to the director, draft legislation and so on. I will devote myself to combat corruption in the future.