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字数：300 满分：100分
语句间的衔接成分用得不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；作者词汇基本功很好，但在高级词汇的积累上还要努力；从句使用很不错，再接再厉。
Being careful with money marks being careful with your life After entering chollege, we,almost at the first time,are given the right to control and manage money only by our own,which is ,in my opinion, a precious opportunity to learn to be a good money-keeper.I believe someone who aim to lead a successful life must be able to use their money wisely. For our students, firstly, most of time we ask our parents for financial support while mainly focusing on academic performance.Since that we are supposed to cut down our cost in some availabe ways, such as coupons or group-buy deals when we are consuming outside.In fact , the abilites of managing money and controling ourselves are significant for us in the future.It's necessary to save money for some emergencies when we are grown-up to love alone and even have a family to take care of.Therefore, forming the habit of managine money during college life will profit us for a long term. We is not,and should not be ,shameful of being careful with money.we are intended to not only consider parents' financial burden but develop the ability of taking responsible for our lives.
