2012年6月英语四级作文真题:过度包装的现象

正确句子比例较高，适当增加复杂句的使用，文章会更出色；文中学术词汇使用较丰富，但是拼写错误比较多；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用。

On excessive packaging Nowadays,when we go to the super market,we can see there many beautiful packagings. At present,frequently packaging of commdity was to the trend. With the developing of economic,people consumes are more and more higher.Productor catch this spot.They package the goods beautifully.So,many people will buy these goods.They use this spot,earn money from the consumers. As far as concernd,I think this phenomenon is awful.Because many goods just have beautiful packaging,however,they quality aren't very good.Beautiful packaging just chart accoument of consumes.I have a suggestion that don't excessive packaging,focus on the quality.