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2013年4月6日雅思大作文真题:人类在哪些领域取得了进步

发布时间:2013-08-08 16:44浏览次数:36454
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【题目要求

100 years ago, human race believed we would make continue progress in all areas of life. Today, some people feel less certain about this. what areas of progress human race has made? What else areas we haven't developed?

【点评一】

本题是2009年5月21日的话题,属于抽象类话题。抽象类话题看似难写,实际上只要转换成具体话题就容易手了。进步的领域:科技,教育。仍需改进的领域:环保,犯罪,人口老龄化,动物保护,文化语言保护。本题几乎无所不包,雅思写作题库中几乎所有话题都能用于本题。

【点评二】
题目  Some people think the human race has made continual progress in all areas of life, while others believe that there is less certainty about this. What areas of progress human race has made? What else areas we have not developed?
一些人认为人类在各方面已经取得了不断的进步,而另外一些人认为并非如此。人类在哪些领域取得了进步?哪些领域没有取得发展? 
开头段  How to make a better life never fails to capture people’s attention throughout much of the human history ,which serves as a catalyst for the continuing development in every aspect of life. Some people, however, believe that the so called “development” cannot be regarded as real progress. 
中间段1  回答第一问:人类在哪些领域取得了进步? 1. 众所周知,几个世纪以来,人类一直致力于通过发展科技来改善生存环境。
It is commonly believed that human beings have been striking for improving living conditions by evolving science and technology for many centuries.
【论证示范】
Due to the convenient transportation system, citizens in China are able to enjoy fresh American lemons which were once not available to Chinese or people in many other counties. Communication modes mainly relied on writing letters in the past also witnessed a significantly transformation with the advent of internet, making friends or families enable to contact each other instantly by their computers or tablets.2.其次,与过去相比,人类在医学领域取得了许多突破。
Furthermore, compared with the past , there are many breakthroughs having been achieved in medical care. 
中间段2  回答第二问:哪些领域没有取得发展? 1. 污染,全球变暖,物种灭绝等环境问题已经成为很多国家头痛的问题,它们经常会陷于经济发展和生态平衡的困境中。
Environmental problems in terms of pollutions, global warming ,species extinction and so forth, have been a great headache to most nations who always trap into a dilemma between economic development  and ecological balance. 2.各个种族和宗教间的武装冲突是一个持续性的问题,这对世界的和平与和谐造成了威胁。
Arm conflict among various races and religions is another endless problem posing a large threat to world peace and harmony. 
结尾段  To sum up, although a lack of knowledge concerning how to control human desire seems to be a big handicap to human civilization, it should be admitted that we have made a great progress in many fields , and the advancement is expected to continue. 

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In recent years, McEwan's creation has an obvious historical turn: in addition to atonement, "black dog" and "Saturday" and other works were involved in the cold war, the Nazis and the American invasion of Iraq and other social events, highlighting his strong historical consciousness and social responsibility. Maxwell had to follow at military father stationed abroad, listen to what he had his father not to mind taking the trouble in Dunkirk during the retreat and was removed after the hospital experience. Although the writer can not experience the battlefield, but "war haze grew up" he always has a kind of hard feelings to the history of the fathers (Kellaway, 2001). The parody of history in atonement is based on his father's experience, and follows two clues, namely, military retreat in the front and the hospital in the rear. Shortly after World War II, British and French allied forces were quickly defeated by German lightning raids. Dunkirk is the last resort to retreat temporary massive military retreat. With the help of all the people, nearly 340 thousand of the British troops evacuated in just a few days, keeping human resources behind the battle. The matter has been transferred to the Second World War myth, known as the "Dunkirk miracle". But in the eyes of Robbie novel "Dunkirk miracle" is tantamount to funk, he "felt that the withdrawal is a burning shame and humiliation. He felt ashamed." Make the reader feel trembling, "retreat was a bloody massacre, exposed before is" hanging on the tree, "the child's leg stump to" and can be seen everywhere in the body. But only for the beaches of Dunkirk fled to the collapse of the military have been completely indifferent. A nation, a civilization, will collapse before its eyes. This "Robbie saw several of the soldiers hit a British Royal Air Force to take the case," There is not much left. personal responsibility is all gone, but there are more and more soldiers around to see. The reader has not completely in the so-called capital spend million people united as one man in the history of the evacuation, some just boring soldiers to torture others and get pleasure. Virtually, writers disclose the loss of personal dignity and the fall of collective humanity caused by war. Maxwell by parodying retreat to Dunkirk, will be very touching the historical picture for the treatment of micro or even negative, no doubt with irony. To this end, some people can not help but condemn the writers who have no respect for historical facts and indulge themselves in the suspicion of unfounded historical imagination. But people who know the style of wheat know that they are very "documentary"". The creation process of atonement goes through a great deal of historical research work. But writers always say their works: "imitate the real world, but have a certain immunity to it" (McEwan, 2007:, 47). This attitude of "both self referential and contradictory claims about historical events and characters" is essentially the spirit of parody (Linda, 2009). This shows that the history of the novel has not been elevated, but intentionally transplanted into a particular individual experience and awareness, which highlights the writer's concern for life itself. Such a history is undoubtedly strange, but it provides a more communicative and interpretive history than the unchangeable and rigid official history. In addition, Mak also through the perspective of Brian Bnnie to lead readers to visit the situation in the back hospital. In order to make up for their youth crime, Brian Bnnie gave up the chance to go to University of Cambridge, to join the voluntary hospital nurse work ", all day immersed in the bedpan, bottle washing, wiping and drying and other complicated things. But even more than this routine, exhausting nursing, she was terrified of seeing soldiers burn their skin, split their heads, and break their intestines. Among them, the writer focuses on the picture of Brian Bnnie cleaning a soldier whose face is blown up. "His face has been destroyed, and pink flesh is exposed to the air.". From his missing cheek, he could see his upper and lower molars, and his sparkling tongue. Long and shocking." This picture can not help but badly mutilated, frightful to the ear we think of the writer "Ian the terrible" nickname. Here the writer still adopted the method of writing the history of the body, as he himself said: "I indulge in vivid detail or rich picture of the scene, which can cause unspeakable emotion" (McEwan, 2007: 46). Thus, compared with the cold, impersonal figures and dates recorded in the official history, writers prefer to discover exciting lower case histories in a grand historical context. During the creation of atonement, there were still survivors of World War ii. They have a lot of people suffering from shell shock, the past is very sensitive, even refuses to talk about. Out of respect for the survivors, the writer devoted himself to writing the parts of the hospital to investigate the most powerful British Royal War Museum, in an effort to minimize the crime of fiction. But the disappointment is that most of the war history that writers can find is about military and political. The rear hospital has become insignificant, and hospital care has been neglected." (McEwan, 2007:, 46) it is interesting that Michael's only find about the hospital is written by British female writer Lucille Andrews (Lucilla Andrews) with an autobiography of the novel "no romance at all".

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