邢台二中2012―2013学年上学期高二年级期末测试试卷英语作文

很好的运用了从句，但部分句子稍有瑕疵；文章结构清晰，有效地采用了多种衔接方法；一些高级词汇的使用比较灵活，但请检查文章的单词拼写。

From 2010 the several compus incidents continue to happened horriblely,When people were astonoshed about these incidents,We had to think about how to improve school safety. Firstly the school should arrange more guards to improve safety,Secoundly as the students,We should pay more attention for the persons whose behaviores are unnormal.Thirdly our parents should also take actions to support the school,For example,They can pick up the students from the primary school.Totally speaking, everyone is a keepguard who protects our student from attacting.At this atmosphere,territists have no changes to threat to our compus.