文章能较灵活地使用高级词汇,但词汇量积累不足,文中存在个别拼写错误;层次分明,但过渡词欠缺;增加一些从句的使用,文章会更棒。
The Impact of the Internet on Interpersonal Communication With the development of internet,There are more than that ones oten communication on virtual world.As far as my knowledge is concerned,the impact negatively of internet communication.To its impact,follows the way. To being with.communicate with other such friend,family and bussiness all has on internet.As we all konw the skill of communication is decide personal existens
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