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字数：300 满分：100分
作者能较灵活准确地使用词汇表达，但高级词汇的积累还有很大的空间；从句使用量不足；文章层次不够分明，缺少组织，需注意文章整体的组织结构。
Under the umbrella When rain heavily, some people carry umbrella, some people forget. People of no umbrella are close to people with umbrella and stand in the umbrella to avoid getting wet. However, the rain from the umbrella made wetter than in rain. The people squeeze the people with umbrella, which made their hair wet because of the water from the umbrella. Of course, it is homiletic parable with profound meaning. When the poor make friends with the rich, they usually suffer losses. One rainy day I thought this circumstance in street but I didn’t write out, because it is likeness the style of tea talks of Mr. Nachang.
