加强一些长句和复杂句的使用;文中词汇丰富度不足,拼写检查也要重视;文章上下文衔接不是很紧凑,结构缺少组织。
Jackson is my good friend.He and I have meet in dongguan.He like play football and basktball.His english isvery good and often teach me english.We stay together in dongguan 4 years.He is very friendly for every one and help each other.Later he has go to work in guanzhou and I come to zhongshan. Now,we still have keep touch.I am very happy for the good friend.