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It is the most important for us to study English. For nowadays people all over the world are connected together than ever. For example, each years millons of people go abroad to study or travel in china. And also tens of thousands of the company from diffenrent countries invest in china. English becomes the only language which is used widely. Athough we realize the importance of learning English,It is difficulty for most of us to master English.We can write and read English but not to open our mouth.Today I share some experiences how to learn English. Firstly we should build the interesting of learning English by all kinds of meanings.Secondly we should insist in learning English every day ,even though sometimes we feel boring.Thirdly we should open our mouth to speak English as possible as we can.Internet gives us a good platform where you can find a variaty of resouces .