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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第1套):以貌取人

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:04浏览次数:8968
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For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay explaining why it isunwise to judge a person by their appearance. You can give explain toillustrate your point .

You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words。

用户的作文(系统评分42.0分
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句式多变,多多练习从句的使用;文中基本没有过渡词和衔接词,建议增加衔接词汇的积累;作者能较好的使用一些高级词汇,但文章中拼写错误较多。

用户练习作文:

the Han dynasty is a most important peorid in China 's history .During the Han dynasty ,there are many extrodinary successes .First , it opens the door to other cultures and the trade of aboard is very thrive .the sild road that made by the Han dynasty arrived the milldeaste of Asia even to the Roman.It appears many famous work inculuding the litterature,histoy, and phisolosphy ,all kinds of artists are thrive on .The first dictionary of China had finished in the 100BC.It conculude 9 thousands words with different spelling and provide the explains .The science also got a great progress in this peorid .The paper,water clocks,sunials and the machin of measuring the earthquke had been created .The Han dynasty existed 400years but it destoried by the corruption of the governors,eventurely.

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