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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第1套):以貌取人

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:04浏览次数:8968
要求:

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay explaining why it isunwise to judge a person by their appearance. You can give explain toillustrate your point .

You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words。

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从句使用量不足;文章在高级词汇的使用上还要下功夫,拼写检查也需加强;文中基本没有过渡词和衔接词,建议增加衔接词汇的积累。

用户练习作文:

The Han dynasty is a most important period in China 's history .In the course of the Han dynasty ,there are many extraodinary successes .First , it opens the door to other cultures and the trade of aboard is properous .The sild road which made in the Han dynasty arrived the western Asia even to the Rome.It appears many great works,inculuding the litterature,histoy, and phisolosphy ,all kinds of artists are thrived .The first dictionary of China had finished in the 100BC.It inculuded 9,000words with different spelling and provided the illustrate .The science also got great progress in this period .The paper,water clocks,sundials and the machine of measuring the earthquake had been created .The Han dynasty existed 400s, but it destroied by the corruption of the governors,eventurely.

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