2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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I come from Hunang China. There are many interesting things and places in my hometown. But if you come, I would take you to the Hengshan. Hengshan is one of the five famous mountains. It is not such tall, I always clam it. When you stand in there. You will feel something excited and can help to cry. Under your eyes. Everything is small and nothing is more importanted than to feel the nature. I like stanging in the mountain top and close my eyes. At that time, I feel such relaxed. Hoping you can come my hometown, I would not let you feel boing.