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字数：300 满分：100分
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The Han dynasty is a most important period in China 's history .In the course of the Han dynasty ,there are many extraodinary successes .First , it opens the door to other cultures and the trade of aboard is prosperous .The sild road which made in the Han dynasty arrived the western Asia even to the Rome.It appears many great works,including the litterature,histoy, and phisolosphy ,all kinds of artists are thrived .The first dictionary of China had finished in the 100BC.It includs 9,000charachters with different spelling and provided the illustrate .The science also got great progress in this period .The paper,water clocks,sundials and the machine of measuring the earthquake had been created .The Han dynasty existed 400s, but it destroyed by the corruption of the governors,eventually.
