文章上下文衔接自然;文中从句使用不丰富;文中拼写错误比较多,用词也稍显贫乏。
where is the most interestingplace in my hometown is tengwangge.the tengwangge is a famous view in my hometown.so i will take my friends of from other country to here.what we are know is that the tengwnage is the one of jiangnan thirth old flow.its in nanchang ,and with the gan river.