小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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My good friend is a beautiful girl ,she always help me do many thing.I like her very much,she is kind , cute ,and smart.Whenever I face difficulity ,she always be with me.When I am sad ,she confortable me and help me go through the hard time.We always stay together and we have the same interests and same values of the world.