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字数：300 满分：100分
复杂句使用不错，句法规范；文章结构不错，使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词；文中词汇表达灵活多样，高级词汇使用熟练，但拼写错误要注意。
It seems that the difference between career woman and housewife is very clear,but in my mind ,not all the women who have a career are called the career woman,for example ,the domestic servants of nanny.It is conventional that the career woman means those women who have received the education and have well trained in vocational ethic.They are work on some professional jobs.Such as the Engineering Technician, scientific and technological workers,the communist party officials,teacher,doctor,lawyer,editor, repoter,campany employee,enterpreneur and so on .Most clothese with beautiful and grave are designed for them.
