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字数：300 满分：100分
文中衔接词和过渡词使用的很棒；作者句法知识掌握的不够好，可适当增加从句的使用；作者词汇基础扎实，注意文中极个别的拼写错误。
It seems that the difference between career woman and housewife is very clear,but in my mind,not all the women who have a career are called the career woman,for example ,the domestic servants of nanny.It is conventional that the career woman means those women who have received the education and well trained in vocational ethic.They are working on some professional jobs,such as the Engineering Technician, scientific and technological workers,the communist party officials,teachers,doctors,lawyers,editors, repoters,company employee,entrepreneur and so on .Most clothes with beautiful and grave are designed for them.
