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2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第1套):The most interesting place

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:35浏览次数:16950
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题目:Suppose a foreign friend of yours is going to visit your hometown,what is the most interesting place you would like to take him/her to see and why?
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可适当增加几条从句;文章结构不错,使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词;作者词汇基础不错,注意极个别的拼写错误。

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Wandering in campus, posts of introducing various activities are everywhere. However, part from them is good to me, the rest is not. Since I choose English major, the English speech has benefited me more. In the course of the time I prepare my speech, I need to find much information about the title which I was going to talk about. At that time, my knowlege has been enrich and broadening my horizen. In addition, the amendments were made times to make my speech more easilier to understand and the language was more influential.That not only could improve my writing skill , but also make me further know grammer well. Besides, even I did not get the rank in English speech competition ,but it also improve my confidence . So I think english speech competition is the activity which was most benefit to me.

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