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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第1套):以貌取人

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:04浏览次数:8999
要求:

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay explaining why it isunwise to judge a person by their appearance. You can give explain toillustrate your point .

You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words。

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可适当增加几条从句;全文结构较为严谨;高级词汇使用贫乏,注意一下个别拼写错误。

用户练习作文:

When it comes to the beauty, some beautiful appearance will ocurr to you.The reasons why we recall it is that our brain sometimes cannot figure out the the beauty for the first time.As a result, we are unwise to judge a person by apperance. How could we get rid of this mistake and misunderstanding are as follows. To begin with,the first impression may cause many mistakes.For example,If you get along with a beauty ,with time going by,you may find her evil heart and bad temper.The only thing you can come out is that the time can test what is suit for you.What's more, as it goes to say that we go into what others inner heart is.Sometimes God gives someone different appearance,and we cannot take it for fun.Instead,we are expected to ackownedge the warm heart. In a word ,only when we get along with each other can we figure out what kind of person he or she is.

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