文章词汇表达要更加熟练,希望能更多使用一些学术词汇;文中衔接词丰富;可适当增加复杂句和从句的使用。
due attention should be given to the study of Chinese nowadays it is become a popular phenomenon that more and more students ignore the study of Chinese,especially the university students. there are three reasons which cause that.Firstly,many students enter the university study their major and they think the Chinese is not useful,study that would cost their time and it would not be use in the future.secondly some students said they were born the China and they study the Chinese every day.they do not spend special time on it.thirdly many schools do not have enough attention on Chinese. as my opinion, I think we need study Chinese.