文章结构不错,使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词;复杂句使用不错,句法规范;文章词汇表达丰富,一些高级词汇的使用也比较灵活。
Wandering in campus, posts of introducing various activities are everywhere. However, part from them is good to me, the rest is not. Since I choose English major, the English speech has benefited me more. In the course of the time I prepare my speech, I need to find much information about the title which I was going to talk about. At that time, the information is enrich my knowledge and broaden my horizon. In addition, the amendments were made times to make my speech more easily to understand and the language was more influential.That not only could improve my writing skill , but also make me further know grammer well. Besides, even I did not get the rank in English speech competition ,but it also improve my confidence . So I think english speech competition is the activity which was most benefit to me.