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2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第1套):The most interesting place

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:35浏览次数:16923
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题目:Suppose a foreign friend of yours is going to visit your hometown,what is the most interesting place you would like to take him/her to see and why?
用户的作文(系统评分82.5分
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句法方面做得很棒,但是从句不多;文中词汇表达灵活多样,也能较好的使用部分高级词汇;文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词,结构比较严谨。

用户练习作文:

Wandering in campus, posts of introducing various activities are everywhere. However, part from them is good to me, the rest is not. Since I choose English major, the English speech has benefited me more. In the course of the time I prepare my speech, I need to find much information about the title which I was going to talk about. At that time, the information is enrich my knowledge and broaden my horizon. In addition, the amendments were made times to make my speech more easily to understand and the language was more influential. That not only could improve my writing skill , but also make me further know grammar well. Besides, even I did not get the rank in English speech competition, but it also improves my confidence. For that reason,I think English speech competition is the activity which most benefit me.

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