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字数：300 满分：100分
采用了适当的衔接手法，层次清晰；作者词汇基础不错，高级词汇表达比较恰当，避免拼写错误；可适当增加几条从句。
whether saving money is necessary Even from ancient China, saving money is especially a great tradition for us. Nowadays, an amount of people are still insisting on this, for which comes a heating debate on whether we should keep it in the modern society. Opinions are varied among different people. From where I stand, it's much necessary for us to continue the tradition. There are many factors as follows. To start with, we aren't supposed to leave behind the tradition of our ancedents. Besides, we are required to focus on the expenditure in the future in case of something in need rather than spending all of what we have. When our family are sick or we plan to start new business, no adoutedly we need much money. Last but not least, we could use the money saved to do many meaningful things. For instance, when an earthquake stricks a area, we can give a hand to the helpless people with money. Taking everything into consideration, saving money is advocated, which can be rageared as an vertue.
