从句数量偏少;采用了恰当的衔接手法,层次清晰;作者能较灵活地使用高级词汇,但要注意减少拼写错误。
Jumping to a conclusion immediately without thinking twice is evidently unwise.Let me demonstrate this in the following paragraph. Firstly,when we look at something,we can only know about it's apperance,which is obviously insufficient in drawing a conclusion.There is an old saying that we can not tell a person from his/her outlook.An handsome man can be a thief who disguises himself by his charming outlook,but a normal person can do something great.So if we just judge a person by his/her apperance but ignore his/her morality and ability,we are likely to make mistakes.This is the same in the other areas in our daily life,we can only through scientific research that we come to a right conclusion.Only in this way,can we be wise enough in encountering so many puzzles in our daily life and not to be fooled by them. secondly,news from others espeicialy those translated person by person has a large possibity of wrong information.This is beacase this kind of news has no authentical source and may be distorted through the translating process.If we always trust this type of informatin,we are always be tricked by it.Believing and pass away gossips can do a hurm to those innocent victims and mistrusting unauthentic but important information sometimes may be a curb in our way to success. It's necessary for every adult to think dependently,and then get a thoughtful conclusion. Apprentaly draw a conclusion when you see or listen something is unwise.
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