湖南衡阳市八中2013届高三5月月考试卷英语作文

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With the development of the internet technology,More and more internet shops were opened.Some giant net shops ,such as Taobao and JD, changed people shopping habbits. People,especially young,like shopping online. People benefit from shopping online, It is convenient,fast and cheap.It only takes several minites to finish complex shopping that spends half of day by the offline.You can buy the cheaper products by comparing with different internet shops online.you can get not only the real products but also a variety of services, such as fligting tickets,paying the utility fees,and booking a table and so on.Totally speaking, Shopping online have changed our life style. Although we get a lot of conveniences from shopping online,we also feel some positive impact.we choose the products which aren't things what we want, We have to spend more time to return.Sometimes we buy a lot of products what we don't need to use.As a customer we should keep a clear brain to buy something online or offline.