语句间的衔接成分用得不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;作者句法基本功不错,可适当增加从句的使用;作者词汇基本功很好,高级词汇表达也比较恰当。
Jumping to a conclusion immediately without thinking twice is evidently unwise. Let me demonstrate this in the following paragraph. Firstly,when we look at something,we can only know about it's appearance, which is obviously insufficient in drawing a convincing conclusion. There is an old saying that don't judge a person by the clothes he wears.This tells us that appearance can be deceiving. An handsome man, for instance, can be a thief who disguises himself by his delicate look, but a person with a more than common look can do something strikingly great. So if we just judge a person by his/her appearance but ignore his/her morality and ability, we are likely to make mistakes. This is the same in the other areas in our daily life, only through scientific research, can we come to a reasonable conclusion and avoid being fooled by so many puzzles in our daily life . Secondly,news from others especially those spread person by person has a large possibility of wrong information. This is because this kind of news has no authentical source and is easily distorted through the translating process. If we always trust this type of information without suspicion, we are always tricked by it. Believing and pass on gossips can do harm to those innocent victims and even lead to social disruption.Since we live in the age of information explosion and so much information is stuck in our life, it's urgent for everyone to pick out useful information which is a key factor to right decisions. To sum up, you should think twice before you draw conclusions .
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