文中词汇表达较丰富恰当,但高级词汇稍显不足;从句使用很不错,再接再厉;衔接词和过渡词用的很不错。
Dear David I'm glad to hear about you are going to learned Chinese come to Lanzhou soon.Chinese is an useful and difficulty language,if you want to learn it,first ,you need to listening radio,watching TV to acknowledge these words,then remember them.second,through a few ways to make some new friends,study with their together,to improved your listening skill.finally ,I hope you will happy come to China and learned Chinese