从句使用很不错,再接再厉;文中词汇表达较丰富恰当,但高级词汇稍显不足;文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词,结构比较严谨。
Dear David I'm glad to hear about you are going to learned Chinese come to Lanzhou soon.Chinese is a useful and difficult language,if you want to learn it,first ,you need to listening radio,watching TV to acknowledge these words,to remember them.second,through a few ways to make some new friends,study with be their together,to improved your listening skill.finally ,I hope you will happy come to China and learned Chinese