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托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第50篇:是否该活到老学到老

发布时间:2013-08-19 17:00浏览次数:3522
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作文题目:

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? 

One should not give up on getting a degree just because she is a little older.

Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

是否该活到老学到老。只是因为自己老了,就可以放弃学业吗?你怎么看?给我具体原因并举出例子。

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用户的作文(系统评分82.5分
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作者词汇基础很好,也能较灵活使用高级词汇,望继续努力;语句间的衔接成分用得不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;作者英语功底扎实,可适当调整文中从句数量。

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Nowadays, with the life level becomes better and better, more and more adult people without much education are wondering whether they should go back to school to get learning and get a degree. I'd say, just do it, go ahead. I suppose someone are considering going to Campus. So firstly, you can learn knowledge in university, this may teach you more, open your mind, let you know ,wow, there're plenty of things I don't know and I don't event think about before. This is really what you like, make you feel like you are literate now, this is not joking. For example, when you don't understand a foreign language, you cannot know what's it when a book in that language was in front of your eyes, but after you learn that language, you would know what it is talking about. Furthermore, Campus life is a different life from what you experienced in society, you'll meet a lot of people here, professors, teachers, young classmates, etc.,you'll feel your classmates' youth and atmosphere, there will be some really genius guys in them, and when you contact with them, you may affected by their thinking style, or how to solve problem, and so on. And this will make you happy because you are kind of become smarter at the same time. Last one, this is good for your salary. If you work hard to prepare the entrance of University, this might be tough at that moment, then after you get the offer from them, began to start your campus life, and endure your learning road, finally you graduated from university and get your degree, Then, that's the sweet time you would be very happy at that moment. With those certification, when you go to an interview, you are qualified to ask a high salary, because of your working experience and new degree. In all, no matter how old you are, it's never late for you to get education.

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