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新东方托福高分作文:面对面的交流是交流方式中比较好的一个吗?

发布时间:2013-08-05 17:22浏览次数:5047
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【题目要求

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Face-to-face communication is better than other types of communication, such as letters, email, or telephone calls. Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.

【题目分析

同意或者不同意,都是错误的。不结合具体情况,无法判断哪一个更好。先比较两种沟通方式的优缺点(relative merits)

然后根据不同的情况说明那种方式更好:跟老板、同事沟通,face-to-face communication更好;跟愤怒的投诉顾客,telephone更好一些;跟情人沟通,当然face-to-face更好。

用户的作文(系统评分60.0分
评语:

语句间的衔接成分用得不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;从句使用很不错,再接再厉;文中词汇表达灵活多样,也能较熟练地使用一定的高级词汇。

用户练习作文:

some people asked me ,if you want it more that face-to-face communication,or the other types of communication,such as email,letters,or telephone calls, i think no matter what types of it ,always make you and the one you communicate closer and closer,we often choose different ways to communicate on that different condition but in my opinion,i think face-to-face communication is better than other types of communication,maye just because of my habits,i am the person that do want to talk much to others , so i aways believe if you have some thoughts about somebody or something ,you should speak out instead of keeping in your mind .if you don't talk to yourboss what you think or decide,so you may miss the chance to change or progress,if you don't talk yourself to your friends or family ,you may live so lonely,in the world ,we should have many people concerned you around you ,so speak out,don't be shy.

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