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Everyone's life have the limited age as we know but the width of our lifes can be spreaded longest even if beyond what we thought.As a teenager,we are learning.We cann't stop learning where ever you are,learning can help us to fill up our mind,all kinds of knowledge will be used to everwhere in our normal lifes.We can pass the examation, undertake the work smoothly,solve a little problems in the public or house. To do exercises is also the important things.The body is all the basic in front of everything.We shounld have a good body in the base of exercise.Having a good relationship with our famills ,friends also with colleague.You will own a very good relationship with the people around you with a high EQ. So learning how to conmmunicate with people is also be paid attention to as well as the basic knowlege in the book.Well,Many good knowlege and skill,some exercises,a high EQ will help you have a good life.The greatest use of life is to spend it for something that will outlast it.
